Contents
- 1 About Prompt
- 2 Prompt Details
- 2.1 🎬 Scene 1
- 2.2 Characters:
- 2.3 Dialogues:
- 2.4 🎬 Scene 2
- 2.5 Characters:
- 2.6 Dialogues:
- 2.7 🎬 Scene 3
- 2.8 Characters:
- 2.9 Dialogues:
- 2.10 🎬 Scene 4
- 2.11 Characters:
- 2.12 Dialogues:
- 2.13 🎬 Scene 5
- 2.14 Characters:
- 2.15 Dialogues:
- 2.16 🎬 Scene 6
- 2.17 Characters:
- 2.18 Dialogues:
- 2.19 🎬 Scene 7
- 2.20 Characters:
- 2.21 Dialogues:
- 2.22 🎬 Scene 8
- 2.23 Characters:
- 2.24 Dialogues:
- 2.25 🎬 Scene 9
- 2.26 Characters:
- 2.27 Dialogues:
- 2.28 🎬 Scene 10
- 2.29 Characters:
- 3 Related
About Prompt
- Prompt Type – Scene-by-Scene
- Genre – Thriller
- Dialogues Language – English – United Kingdom
- Prompt Platform – Sora
- Prompt Language – English
- Category – Video/Story
- Prompt Title – Sora Movie Prompt – Ashes of Tomorrow | Dystopian Short Film
Prompt Details
🎬 Scene 1
An extreme wide shot establishes a breathtakingly desolate cityscape, captured in the melancholic light of a perpetual toxic twilight. The skeletal remains of skyscrapers, draped in creeping, rust-coloured ivy, claw at a jaundiced sky thick with swirling ash and smog. The colour palette is a desaturated symphony of grimy ochres, slate greys, and sickly greens. Sunlight struggles to pierce the oppressive atmosphere, casting long, distorted shadows that writhe and dance across the rubble-strewn streets. In the foreground, a once-grand boulevard is now a graveyard of rusted-out vehicles and collapsed infrastructure, with nature aggressively reclaiming the concrete. A fine, grey ash, like a funereal snowfall, perpetually drifts down, coating every surface in a layer of grime. The air itself seems heavy, visible, and difficult to breathe. Two solitary figures, Kael and Elara, move with practiced caution through this urban tomb. They are dwarfed by the scale of the destruction, their small forms emphasizing the overwhelming emptiness and decay of their world. Every detail is rendered with hyper-realistic texture, from the cracked and peeling paint on a forgotten road sign to the individual shards of glass glittering amidst the debris. The scene is utterly silent except for the ambient sounds of a dead world, a haunting tableau of a civilisation long since crumbled into dust and memory.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Kaelan: Another dead end, El. Nothing but rust and ghosts here.
- Elara: We just need to keep looking. There has to be something.
Tone: Desolate, melancholic, suspenseful
Background music: A low, mournful cello drone accompanied by distant, dissonant strings. A sense of vast emptiness.
Camera directions: Extreme wide shot, anamorphic lens. Static camera. The lighting is low-key and diffused, filtered through a thick, ash-filled atmosphere. A desaturated colour palette of greys, browns, and muted greens. Deep focus, keeping both the characters and the ruined cityscape sharp.
Actions: Kaelan stands still, surveying the area with a practiced, critical eye. Elara crouches down, sifting carefully through a small pile of debris, her movements methodical and hopeful.
Sound design: The low, constant whisper of wind funnelling through skeletal buildings. The faint, distant creak of stressed metal. The soft crunch of their boots on ash-covered ground.
🎬 Scene 2
The camera shifts to an intimate, macro close-up on Elara’s grimy, gloved fingers as they delicately brush away a layer of fine, grey ash from a metallic object half-buried in the dirt. The detail is exquisite; every grain of dirt and every frayed thread on her glove is visible. As she clears the final layer, the object is revealed to be a small, miraculously intact data chip, its gold contacts gleaming faintly in the dim, oppressive light. The shallow depth of field throws the background—a chaotic mess of twisted rebar and fractured concrete—into a soft, indistinct blur, focusing all attention on this tiny, anachronistic piece of technology. A single particle of ash drifts down and lands on the chip’s surface, a stark reminder of the desolate world it has been salvaged from. Elara’s breath hitches audibly, a small cloud of vapour in the cold air. Her blue eyes, wide with a mixture of disbelief and burgeoning excitement, reflect the faint light from the chip. This small discovery feels monumental, a vibrant spark of potential in a monochrome world of decay. The shot lingers, allowing the weight of the moment to settle, the contrast between the pristine technology and the surrounding ruin creating a powerful visual and emotional anchor for the story.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Elara: (Whispering, breathless) Kael… look. I’ve got something.
- Kaelan: (Off-screen) Probably just more junk. Don’t get your hopes up.
Tone: Hopeful, intimate, tense
Background music: The low cello drone is joined by a single, high-pitched, sustained violin note, creating a sense of tension and discovery.
Camera directions: Macro shot focusing on the data chip in Elara’s hand. Extremely shallow depth of field. Natural, dim lighting from the overcast sky. The shot is stable, handheld, with a slight, almost imperceptible tremor to convey Elara’s excitement.
Actions: Elara’s fingers delicately brush ash off the data chip. She picks it up, her eyes widening as she realises what it is. Kael remains off-screen, his voice a cynical counterpoint.
Sound design: The gentle, abrasive sound of fingers brushing against dirt. Elara’s soft, sharp intake of breath. The ambient wind dies down slightly, creating a pocket of focused silence.
🎬 Scene 3
The scene plunges into near-total darkness, the camera following Kael and Elara as they descend a set of fractured concrete steps into the gaping maw of a derelict underground station. The only light source is the narrow, flickering beam from Kael’s wind-up torch, which cuts a nervous swathe through the oppressive gloom. The air is thick with the subterranean smells of damp earth, decay, and cold, stagnant water. The torch beam dances across walls covered in peeling posters from a forgotten era, their bright colours now faded to ghostly pastels. Water drips from the ceiling, each drop echoing unnaturally in the cavernous space. Their destination becomes clear: a bank of public access terminals, their screens shattered and dark, save for one. This single terminal, though covered in dust and grime, appears structurally intact. Its screen is a black mirror, reflecting the distorted, bobbing light of the torch and the ghostly images of their own faces, drawn and tense. The scale of the station around them is implied rather than seen, with the darkness pressing in from all sides, creating a deeply claustrophobic and tense atmosphere. They have found a potential sanctuary, a place to unlock the chip’s secrets, but it feels more like a tomb.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Elara: Do you think it will work?
- Kaelan: Only one way to find out. Needs power first.
Tone: Claustrophobic, suspenseful, eerie
Background music: Low, ominous ambient tones. The music becomes sparser, emphasizing the echoing silence and diegetic sounds.
Camera directions: Low-angle tracking shot, following them down the stairs. Chiaroscuro lighting, with the single torch beam creating harsh highlights and deep, impenetrable shadows. The colour is almost monochrome, save for the sickly yellow of the torchlight. A sense of immense pressure from the surrounding darkness.
Actions: Kael leads the way down the steps, sweeping his torch from side to side. Elara follows closely behind, clutching the data chip in her hand. They stop in front of the intact terminal, the torchlight lingering on its dark screen.
Sound design: The rhythmic, echoing drip of water. The scuff of their boots on gritty concrete. The frantic, mechanical whirring sound of Kael’s wind-up torch. Their dialogue sounds close and intimate in the vast, dead space.
🎬 Scene 4
An extreme close-up focuses on Kaelan’s hands, a testament to a life of hard labour and ingenuity. His fingers, though covered in grime and calloused, move with a surgeon’s precision. He has pried open a service panel below the terminal, revealing a tangled nest of old, brittle wires. Using a multi-tool scavenged from his belt, he carefully strips the insulation from two corroded cables. The camera stays tight on the action, capturing the minute details: the way the plastic insulation cracks and flakes away, the dull copper of the exposed wire. He then retrieves a jury-rigged power cell from his pack—a bulky, taped-together collection of salvaged batteries. With intense concentration etched on his face, reflected in the low torchlight, he touches the exposed wires to the terminals of the power cell. For a heart-stopping moment, nothing happens. Then, a brilliant, violent shower of blue and white sparks erupts from the connection point, illuminating his face in a harsh, strobing glare. The sudden flash reveals the deep lines of focus and weariness around his eyes. He doesn’t flinch, holding the connection steady as the machine groans in protest, the air filling with the acrid smell of burnt ozone and melting plastic. This is a moment of raw, desperate creation in a world of decay.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Kaelan: (Through gritted teeth) Come on, you old git… just a spark.
- Elara: (Whispering) It’s working… Kael, it’s working!
Tone: Tense, desperate, high-stakes
Background music: A fast, rhythmic, pulsing synth beat begins, low in the mix, overlaid with discordant, screeching strings that mirror the electrical sparks.
Camera directions: Extreme close-up on Kael’s hands and the wires. Rack focus from his hands to his face when the sparks fly. The lighting is dynamic and harsh, provided entirely by the sparks and the dim torch. High-speed shutter effect to capture the individual sparks.
Actions: Kael meticulously strips wires and connects them to a power cell. He holds the connection steady as a shower of sparks erupts. Elara, just out of frame, leans in closer, her voice filled with anxious hope.
Sound design: The dry crackle of old plastic insulation. The sharp, aggressive ZAP and sizzle of electricity. A low, powerful hum as the terminal begins to draw power. The smell of ozone is almost palpable.
🎬 Scene 5
The camera is now a medium close-up on the terminal’s screen. After the initial violent surge of power, the screen flickers erratically, displaying lines of corrupted code and dead pixels that cascade down the display like digital rain. The sound is a cacophony of static and the groan of dying capacitors. Just as it seems the ancient machine will fail, the chaos resolves. The screen stabilizes, bathing Kael and Elara’s faces in a cold, ethereal blue-green light. A command prompt blinks expectantly. Elara, leaning into the frame, carefully inserts the tiny data chip into a slot on the side of the console. For a moment, nothing. Then, with a soft chime that sounds alien in this dead place, the data loads. A topographical map materializes on the screen, rendered in simple, glowing vector lines. It shows their ruined city and a path leading far beyond it, through wastelands and dead zones. At the very end of the path, a single point of light pulses gently, next to a single, beautifully rendered word: ‘EDEN’. The light from the screen reflects in their wide, astonished eyes. Kael’s cynicism melts away for a fraction of a second, replaced by a raw, unguarded awe. Elara’s expression is one of pure, unadulterated triumph and wonder. In the cold, dark tomb of the underground, they have found a treasure map to a mythical paradise.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Elara: (Awestruck whisper) Is that… a map?
- Kaelan: (Voice rough with emotion) It says… Eden.
Tone: Awestruck, revelatory, hopeful
Background music: The pulsing synth and strings cut out abruptly, replaced by a single, clear, resonant piano chord that hangs in the air, full of wonder and possibility. A soft, ethereal choir swells underneath.
Camera directions: Medium close-up of the terminal screen, showing the map rendering. The camera then slowly pushes in on the word ‘EDEN’. The scene is lit entirely by the blue-green glow of the monitor, casting soft, stylized light on the characters’ faces. The reflections of the map are visible in their eyes.
Actions: The terminal screen boots up. Elara inserts the chip. The map appears. Kael and Elara stare at the screen, their expressions shifting from tension to pure astonishment.
Sound design: The harsh crackle of static gives way to the clean, digital chime of the terminal accepting the data. A low, steady electronic hum from the powered-on machine. The dialogue is whispered, filled with reverence.
🎬 Scene 6
The fragile moment of hope is brutally shattered. A powerful, piercing beam of white light floods the underground entrance at the top of the stairs, plunging their small, screen-lit sanctuary into harsh silhouette. The light is accompanied by a rising, menacing, high-pitched mechanical whine that vibrates through the concrete floor. Dust motes, previously invisible, now dance frantically in the invasive beam. Kael reacts with startling speed, his survival instincts taking over completely. He grabs Elara by the arm, his grip firm but not bruising, and yanks her down behind the relative cover of the terminal bank. The sudden movement is a blur of motion. He simultaneously rips the wires from his makeshift power cell, and the terminal screen blinks out, plunging them back into absolute, terrifying darkness, the only illumination now being the sweeping searchlight from above. The camera, positioned low to the ground, captures the frantic scramble. Their faces, just moments ago filled with wonder, are now masks of primal fear. The contrast between the ethereal blue glow of hope and the clinical, hunting white light of this new threat is stark and terrifying. The unseen danger feels immense and inescapable, its presence defined only by its light and sound.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Kaelan: (Hissing whisper) Get down! Now!
Tone: Sudden peril, frantic, terrifying
Background music: The hopeful choir music is violently cut off by a deep, distorted bass drop and a high-frequency, anxiety-inducing electronic whine that grows in volume and intensity.
Camera directions: Dutch angle, low to the ground. The scene is backlit by the powerful searchlight, creating sharp, elongated silhouettes. A jarring whip pan follows their movement as they dive for cover. Heavy lens flare from the searchlight.
Actions: A searchlight sweeps into the station entrance. Kael instantly reacts, pulling Elara down behind the terminals and disconnecting the power, plunging the scene into darkness punctuated by the sweeping light.
Sound design: A loud, rising mechanical whine of a drone. The sharp crackle as Kael rips the wires apart. A sudden, sharp gasp from Elara. The sound of their bodies hitting the concrete floor.
🎬 Scene 7
The camera peers over the top of the terminal bank, a POV shot from Kael and Elara’s hiding place. The source of the light and sound is revealed: a sleek, metallic patrol drone, shaped like an aerodynamic insect. It hovers silently and unnervingly at the top of the stairs, its anti-grav engines emitting a barely audible, low-frequency hum. The powerful white searchlight that had illuminated the entrance now deactivates, and the drone’s primary sensor comes online: a single, large, unblinking optical lens that glows with a menacing, blood-red light. The red light sweeps methodically across the darkened station, bathing everything in a crimson, predatory glow. The movement is smooth, precise, and utterly inhuman. It scans the rows of broken terminals, the heaps of rubble, the dripping water on the floor. For a terrifying second, the red beam passes directly over their hiding spot, momentarily illuminating their wide, terrified eyes and the dust particles hanging in the air around them. The shot is held with unbearable tension, the silence broken only by the drone’s low hum and the frantic, shallow breathing of the hidden pair. Every creak of the station’s decaying structure feels like a gunshot, every drip of water a potential betrayal of their position. The drone is the perfect, emotionless hunter in this desolate landscape.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Elara: (Barely audible whisper) Did it see us?
- Kaelan: (Whispering, intense) Don’t move a muscle. Don’t even breathe.
Tone: Extreme suspense, claustrophobic, menacing
Background music: The high-frequency whine is replaced by a deep, sub-bass pulse that mimics a heartbeat. There is no melody, only rhythmic, gut-wrenching tension.
Camera directions: POV shot from their hiding place, looking up at the drone. The camera is shaky, simulating their fear. The scene is lit only by the sweeping red light from the drone’s sensor, creating a hellish, monochromatic red-and-black palette. The focus pulls slightly to the dust illuminated in the beam as it passes over them.
Actions: The patrol drone hovers, its red sensor light sweeping across the area. The beam passes directly over Kael and Elara, who remain perfectly still, holding their breath.
Sound design: The low, ominous hum of the drone’s engines. The sound of their own panicked, shallow breathing, amplified in the silence. A single drop of water hits a metal surface with a loud, startling CLANG.
🎬 Scene 8
A close-up on Elara’s face, huddled in the darkness behind the terminal. Her eyes are squeezed shut, her knuckles white as she grips the fabric of Kael’s jacket. The menacing red glow of the drone’s scanner paints one side of her face in a crimson hue, highlighting the sheen of fearful sweat on her temple. The low, pulsing thrum of its engine is the only sound. After a moment that stretches into an eternity, the red light sweeps away from her, and the deep hum of the drone begins to recede. Her eyes flutter open, wide with relief and residual terror. The camera pans from her face to Kael’s. He hasn’t moved a muscle, his jaw tight, his hazel eyes still locked on the spot where the drone had been. He waits, listening, for a full five seconds after the sound has completely faded before he finally allows himself to exhale, a long, shaky breath that clouds in the cold air. He looks down at Elara, and for the first time, the purely pragmatic survival instinct in his eyes is softened by a profound, weary tenderness. The immediate danger has passed, but the encounter has left a palpable residue of fear and vulnerability, hanging heavy in the subterranean silence.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Elara: (Whispering, trembling) It’s gone.
- Kaelan: (Low and grim) For now. They’re always watching.
Tone: Relieved, tense, intimate
Background music: The tense, pulsing bass fades out, leaving an almost complete, ringing silence. A single, somber piano note is played, echoing in the quiet.
Camera directions: A tight close-up on Elara’s face, then a slow pan to Kael’s. The lighting transitions from the harsh red of the drone back to near-total darkness, with only faint ambient light catching the edges of their forms. The camera is very steady, emphasizing the stillness after the chaos.
Actions: Elara opens her eyes as the drone’s sound fades. Kael waits a few extra seconds before exhaling slowly. He looks down at Elara with a complex expression of relief and concern.
Sound design: The sound of the drone’s engines fades into the distance. The ringing silence is profound. The sound of Kael’s long, shaky exhale is the most prominent sound in the scene.
🎬 Scene 9
The scene returns to the terminal, but the mood is irrevocably changed. Kael, with a newfound sense of urgency, quickly reconnects the power source. There are no sparks this time; the connection is swift and sure. The screen flickers back to life, the glowing map of ‘EDEN’ re-emerging from the darkness like a defiant beacon. The blue-green light once again illuminates their faces, but now their expressions are different. The initial awe has been replaced by a hardened resolve. Elara looks from the screen to Kael, her eyes asking the unspoken question. The camera pushes in slowly on Kael’s face. He stares at the map, his gaze tracing the dangerous path it lays out. His mind is clearly racing, weighing the impossible odds, the constant threat of the drones, the futility he has known his whole life, against this one, single, fragile spark of hope that Elara has found. The internal conflict is visible in the subtle clench of his jaw and the flicker of his eyes. Finally, his gaze hardens into a decision. He raises his grimy, gloved finger and presses it against the screen, his touch leaving a smudge over a route that cuts through the most dangerous, but most direct, territory. It’s a non-verbal declaration, a commitment made in the face of overwhelming fear.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Dialogues:
- Elara: So, what do we do? We can’t just leave it.
- Kaelan: (Voice low, firm) No. We’re not leaving it. We’re going.
Tone: Determined, resolute, pivotal
Background music: A new musical theme begins. It’s a slow, powerful, and dark orchestral piece, dominated by cellos and basses. It’s not triumphant, but filled with a sense of grim determination and immense weight.
Camera directions: Medium two-shot of them looking at the screen. The camera then executes a slow, dramatic push-in on Kael’s face, culminating in an extreme close-up of his finger touching the screen. The only light source is the monitor.
Actions: Kael reconnects the power. The map reappears. After a moment of intense thought, he decisively points to a route on the map, making the decision to go.
Sound design: The soft click of the wires connecting. The gentle hum of the terminal. The sound of Kael’s finger pressing against the glass of the screen. The score begins to swell, taking over the soundscape.
🎬 Scene 10
The final scene mirrors the first, but its emotional context is transformed. An extreme wide shot captures the same desolate cityscape, now bathed in the weak, polluted light of a new dawn. The sun rises as a pale, sickly disc behind a thick veil of smog and ash, casting the world in shades of bruised purple and dirty orange. In the center of the frame, emerging from the shadows of the ruined city, are the two small figures of Kael and Elara. They are seen only in silhouette, their features indistinct, making them archetypal figures of survival and hope. They walk with a clear, unwavering purpose, their pace steady and resolved. They are no longer just scavenging; they are on a journey. They move towards the horizon, their dark forms stark against the toxic beauty of the sunrise. The camera remains static, watching them grow smaller and smaller as they venture into the vast, dangerous, and unknown world that lies between them and the dream of ‘EDEN’. The shot is epic, poignant, and deeply ambiguous. It is not a promise of success, but a testament to the resilience of the human spirit in the face of utter desolation. The ashes of yesterday’s world are the foundation for their journey toward a questionable tomorrow.
Characters:
- Name: Kaelan (Kael)
- Appearance: Late 20s, lean and wiry build, approximately 5’11”. Sharp, angular face with a few days of dark stubble, a thin scar bisecting his left eyebrow. His hair is shaggy, dark brown, and matted with grime. His hazel eyes are perpetually narrowed, constantly scanning his surroundings with a weary vigilance.
- Clothing: A worn, patched-up dark green canvas jacket with reinforced elbows over a faded grey thermal shirt. Grimy, dark cargo trousers with multiple pockets are tucked into scuffed, steel-toed combat boots. He wears fingerless, leather-palmed gloves and has a makeshift respirator mask hanging loosely around his neck.
- Voice: A low, slightly gravelly tone. His accent is a world-weary Estuary English, often speaking in clipped, pragmatic sentences. His voice carries the weight of someone who has seen too much and expects the worst.
- Personality: Deeply cynical and pragmatic, yet fiercely protective of Elara. He is a survivor, resourceful and quick-thinking, but haunted by a past that has stripped him of most of his optimism. His movements are efficient and quiet, a predator in a world of ghosts.
- Name: Elara
- Appearance: Early 20s, with a slender but resilient frame, approximately 5’6″. Her skin is pale, smudged with dirt and soot, highlighting the striking clarity of her wide, expressive blue eyes. Her shoulder-length auburn hair is tied back in a messy, functional knot, with loose strands framing her face.
- Clothing: An oversized, worn brown leather jacket that looks like a hand-me-down, layered over a faded blue jumper. Her jeans are torn and patched, and she wears sturdy, well-worn walking boots. A small, tattered canvas backpack is slung over her shoulders.
- Voice: A clear, more measured tone than Kael’s, with a quiet intensity. Her accent is a neutral Southern English, betraying a past with more stability. She speaks thoughtfully, her voice a stark contrast to the surrounding decay.
- Personality: The unwavering heart of the pair. She possesses a stubborn hope and a sharp intellect, often noticing details Kael’s cynicism overlooks. She is determined, empathetic, and carries a quiet defiance against the grim reality of her world.
Tone: Hopeful, epic, somber, ambiguous
Background music: The dark orchestral score swells to a powerful, emotionally charged crescendo. It is a mix of dread for the journey ahead and a soaring, defiant melody of hope. The full orchestra, including brass and a choir, comes in for the final moment.
Camera directions: Extreme wide shot, static. The composition is painterly, with Kael and Elara perfectly centered as they walk away from the camera toward the horizon. The lighting is from the rising sun, creating stark silhouettes. The color palette is rich with the purples, oranges, and deep greys of a polluted sunrise.
Actions: Kael and Elara walk with purpose away from the camera, deeper into the ruined landscape, their silhouettes shrinking against the vast backdrop.
Sound design: The sound is dominated entirely by the powerful orchestral score. All ambient environmental sounds have faded away, focusing the audience’s entire emotional and auditory attention on the music and the image.